I Am Weak

by Sarah   Nov 26, 2004


I'm beginning to feel weak
I don't remember what I've done
I can feel the pain rush through me
like an angry waterfall

All I wanted was to be loved
and maybe even noticed
but there was a wall blocking me from the outside world

When that wall finally opened up
I could see a bright light
and it shined right through me

I quit fighting for my life
I was worthless and still am
I headed for that light
and now I'm slipping away

I hear my friends and family crying
and they ask each other "why?"
I try to cry out to them
but that cry was my last breath being set free

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jennie

    Beautiful...lol. It's alright about that other poem. It really did sound like some kind of love poem. I let other people see it and they were like What the Heck!!!! It's not your fault...i'm probably not going to show that poem to my best friend or else it's likely that she's start getting weird ideas. Lol.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dani

    wow....ur poems may be short, but your words make them so powerful...nice job...take care...

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow...that was deep. i really like it! but don't think that you are worthless because i sure don't. and thank you so much for commenting on my poems. i greatly appreciate it! :)

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