by Sarah Nov 26, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
~ this poem is about my best friend jessica! she didn't kill herself but yet she was close. i just put a twist in the end! hope you like it! please comment and vote on it and tell me what you think? thanks~ |
by Sarah
thanks for the comments! and she didn't die i just put a diffrent ending.....don't ask why....lol i just thought it should be diffrent :P |
by Knoxy
omg...that poem is awesome...it left me speechless...keep it up!! |
by Sarah
thanks for all the comments! i really appreciate it! |
by candy
is that true? its really sad, but i know what ya mean, my bf is depressed, he cuts and hes now gonna kill himself. he stopped caring about anything else, inclding me, which is why he broke up with me, even though he says he still cares. anyways, if ya ever wanna talk, im here |
by confusion
wow, great poem,such a sad story tho. has a very powerful ending. great work! 5/5 |