that is so sad! i hope that didnt really happen. great poem!

aww sad

omg....that is so sad...i fell like crying
Is it true? If it is omg...r u ok? If that would happen to me i would cry forever i love this poem...i really really do....

this poem is really good and i am really sorry if its based on a true story or if it is a true story. luv ya xxxx.

Good poem, but i Really hope it isn't true, Gr8 writing keep it up!!
xoxoxox

hey everyone thanks for the comments. yes it is based on a true story but my friend didn't kill herself...thank god she listened to me! i just thought i should put a twist to the end. but she was soooooooooo close it wasn't even funny. but whatever i said to her actually went through. i'm glad you guys liked it!
sarah

WoW tha was great it had me teary eyed.. it was really great but i am glad that your friend stopped and listened to you that is great!!! i had a situation like this but they actually killed themself.. well GREAT POEM

*~!~Starr~!~*

wow, great poem,such a sad story tho. has a very powerful ending. great work! 5/5

lu -x-x-x-

is that true? its really sad, but i know what ya mean, my bf is depressed, he cuts and hes now gonna kill himself. he stopped caring about anything else, inclding me, which is why he broke up with me, even though he says he still cares. anyways, if ya ever wanna talk, im here

thanks for all the comments! i really appreciate it!

omg...that poem is awesome...it left me speechless...keep it up!!

thanks for the comments! and she didn't die i just put a diffrent ending.....don't ask why....lol i just thought it should be diffrent :P