Extremely beautiful...god lives in every child...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

Another beautiful and wonderful job...it is so many times that God speaks to us through younger children, at times they truly make us understand what is a blessing.

God Bless

So much to learn i our time of 'want to obtain all' and a money-talks syndrome. Great poem at the right time for the right purpose.

Oh well done!! that was great...i loved the part where you said i do believe she needs to know him the one we celbrates birth on christmas day or something like that..im so glad people have come to realize that whats christmas is all about..but this was pure gold..do keep it up!
~Chelsey~