omg thats brilliant. i almost cried when i read it. i dont reaslly understand it but thats partly why i like it. its amazing- i love it!

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wow nikki! that was amazing! it has to be one of the best poems i have ever read! keep it up!
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*sarah

Amazing poem. Sad, but beautiful. The last line was perfect. Excellent job. 5.

that was really awesome. i didnt quite understand it, and it seemed a bit sick and twisted(if i got the meaning right) but those are some of the best ones. great job. check out some of mine if ya have the time

That's a really good poem....but is it true? Are you really responsible for your friends death? It's kind of a disturbing poem.

A beautifully haunting story was told through this, and it was well-written too. Great twist at the end, and although the rhyming scheme was pretty mundane you pulled it off. Thumbs up.

wow! this was an excellent poem!

Whoa! That sad amd disturbing.. but brilliant! Exellent job!

Wow, Welcome to my favorites!

nice poem nikki =) though its sad but yet veyr well written =) i liked it , its a moving one... hope u pass by mine and read to all the people i once love, vote and comment too ... thanx a lot much love ***letishia***

This is absolutely nothing short of amazing. You are a fantastic poet, make sure to keep writing, you have some of the most talent I have seen on this site. Your rhymes work beautifully, the rhyme scheme was simple, but the story was not, so they made up for each other. The simplicity of the patterns made it for an easier read with good flow, especially because you had to think through as you read it.

Great job!