Wow, this was a beautifully written piece. the title was absolutly lovely and the writing behind it proved nothing short of stunning. a line i really admired, "So innocent, Sits a angel with torn wings."
i love the symbol of a fallen angel and you used it beautifully. fantastic job, amazing piece of work

one of the best poems i have ever read, no doubt! it made me want to cry and go pick some flowers! lol you definitely have talent!
xoxo
Lauren

i love the title....very sensuous

You make the writer feel...and this vision, a glimpse within a world you've caused to become deeper, exemplifies compassion and misery. Excellent

i lke this poem and nice pic and pro lol