Hey everyone plz rate my poem or write comments it will mean alot to me

You have a solid and clear in your poems. I can tell just by reading two of your poems. The way you puts words together in your rymes are stop and go. There is no smoothness which fits to add the to mood and emotional effect that you are going for. I like your work it is a nice change from my own style. Do use the type of style that you use there must be a deep emotional connection with the author to the work. Keep writing because you are pretty good. Keep working to refine your style.

um listen..... my poems cum from my heart so i don;t fit them into particular syle ranges i liek thta u liek them but hav no idea wat ur talkin bout "type of style" and "deep emotional connection"
so yeh

listen mate shut up ok janine write from the heart not the mind obviously you just write poems to wirte well most people write becasue they like it not to be trashed out by a english professer

i sleepin and am sick coz of coke

thanks

that was a gr8 poem i hope u dont really feel that way tho i love the ryming words
n e way keep writin luv rach

HEY THAT WAZ A GREAT POEM VERY SAD AND REAL MOVING I HOPE THAT THE WORD WROTE IN IT R NOT TRUE THO I HOPE YR OK
SHELL

wow janine ive never really read any of your poems but ive been missing out this is so strong and powerful true words and i know you feel this way and i just wish it wasnt like thisand im not gonna say stay strong cause its not as easy as its said but please hang in there your a great person and i love ya you can make it through i know you can your stronger than the rest and **** the haters