~Hate you~

by Janine   Nov 26, 2004


I hate when i look at you
and you always stare back

I hate that one day I'll look at you
but you won't see me back

I hate how your not pretty, not even just a bit

I hate that every time you get clothes, they never seem to fit

I hate the scars all over
on your arms and wrists

And i hate how when your sad
your only resource is slits

I hate it how you get treated different cause your always sad

Or when no one listens to the real reaosns your mad

I hate it how you have tablets, needles and drugs

And i hate it when eveyrone thinks it will be ok with a kiss or a hug

But out of all this, the one thing i really hate

Is when i look and the mirror and see that its me.. the person i hate

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  • 20 years ago

    by Janine

    hmmmm
    im tired its realli late

  • 20 years ago

    by ♥x__Pwincess danii//

    huh ur crazy ryan seriously i am scared pems are supposed to clear your mind not get 100% in a stupid english test jeez

  • 20 years ago

    by Janine

    thanks....i think

  • 20 years ago

    by RyanSmith

    A good poem but the use of words are tricky at times. When I expect for smooth transition from line to line the flow takes a sharp turn. It kept my mind guessing how the flow was going to turn next. I really enjoyed the subject matter. An excellent use of looking at yourself from a third person perpective. Over all a good poem that is different in its structure and solid in its subject matter.

  • 20 years ago

    by Janine

    lol the first time i read ur comment i fort it sed one of ur boobs.....i had to read it again jus to make sure....love ya dj love j9