by Janine Nov 26, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I hate when i look at you |
by Janine
hmmmm |
huh ur crazy ryan seriously i am scared pems are supposed to clear your mind not get 100% in a stupid english test jeez |
by Janine
thanks....i think |
by RyanSmith
A good poem but the use of words are tricky at times. When I expect for smooth transition from line to line the flow takes a sharp turn. It kept my mind guessing how the flow was going to turn next. I really enjoyed the subject matter. An excellent use of looking at yourself from a third person perpective. Over all a good poem that is different in its structure and solid in its subject matter. |
by Janine
lol the first time i read ur comment i fort it sed one of ur boobs.....i had to read it again jus to make sure....love ya dj love j9 |