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thanks homegirl......yeh got he first person

i liked your poem i gave you a five

thanks estera glad u liked it

i liked it even though i have read it before in one of your books

lol the first time i read ur comment i fort it sed one of ur boobs.....i had to read it again jus to make sure....love ya dj love j9

A good poem but the use of words are tricky at times. When I expect for smooth transition from line to line the flow takes a sharp turn. It kept my mind guessing how the flow was going to turn next. I really enjoyed the subject matter. An excellent use of looking at yourself from a third person perpective. Over all a good poem that is different in its structure and solid in its subject matter.

thanks....i think

huh ur crazy ryan seriously i am scared pems are supposed to clear your mind not get 100% in a stupid english test jeez

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im tired its realli late