Comments : Look At You

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    I love it! Great poem!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Look at you
    I do, I look
    I look...
    I look at love
    I look at you"

    That last stanza is just goregous!
    The whole structure of this really helped in making this poem flow so beautifully.
    Amazing
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Ariana

    Awww. this is sweet :)