This poem is amazing! Like i said, there's no way that im better than you at writing..thats like my goal now, to become as good as you =P. But like I was saying, its a really really great poem and I love it. Keep writing, you have written some of the best poems I have ever read ^^.

Oh, if you want to talk, then you can e-mail me at: thacerebralassassin@hotmail.com. Talk to you later.
-Anth-