woman this poem was more than understandable. it was straight from the very own truth. Nice Job!!!!!!!!!!5

You're great at writing your past and pain out...I, again, wish you hadn't gone through it...but there's nothing you can do now except not make the same mistakes your parents did... I notice you have nice flows and rhyming in your poems as this one...and often the end or last line are especially effective.

Thanks.

xxx