wonderful job, very touching. keep up the good work! have a nice day :o) |
That end made my blood run cold. And for this courage you excite there is rare another kind. Thank you for sharing. Perfect. |
by !*!Zoe!*!
Thank you so much Elizabeth. You have no idea how much that meant to me. |
by jennifer
I really loved this poem, it was absolutly touching. I have a few good friends in the war, I hope they make it home safe. Thank-you for writing this amazing poem. |
by Kara !
A lovely poem. It really made me reflect on the conflicts going on around the world. It was very poignant. |
by Hannah M.
I liked it a lot. It is a true scenario. Keep it up. You are very talented. |
by erely
Excellent writing your emotions right out there |
Very well written! |