thats good. maybe u shud make it a bit longer. it kinda feels like you have more to say if u get me. but gd poem babes.

i love your poem its really good hun and thank you for ur comment. loves.

good poem, iv looked at ur others 2 ther all very good, ur a great writer!!
x

WOW is all i can say
its really good thanx for ur comments on my poems
keep up the great work
luv always janice xoxox