wow, nothing short of absolutly stunning. another amazinf piece of work from you, i love that you told a story with haunting images portrayed in your own mind full of dark symbols and metaphors.
"Muted inside the closet on the far side of the other wall
Seems to scream a silent angel, and the wings that broke her fall"
i admire that stance completly. fantastic job

That was a terrific poem, you are pretty much the best writer on here. I love how you describe everything so well. Im in the process of reading all of your poems, but this will be my one comment, because there are just too many for them all
So you are awesome, you're a genius of a writer, keep it up, you can really go far
*Smiles*
Katie

that was great
give it a 5