Very inspiring and heartfelt poem advertising your goal to never give up. nice read...quite a few mistakes though

boar=bore
be beaten= been beaten
abandon=abandoned
does I even=do I even
I will expense=I will expend

all in all a good poem 4/5

Hmm i like this one i think its a great dedication to me i can relate actually.. i love the way how u write specially this poem very inspiring and u expressed it very well at the same well written though, there some errors but it not off.. great starting until the end..5/5

This is amazing...despite being relatively short, you managed to pack in so much depth, feeling and power.

Flow is good throughout, imagery as always is beautifully done and the ending is perfect.
There's not a single thing I would change about this piece.

Just beautiful.

Going into my favouritep oems i really liked this one, all was great in it xxx alex xxx

Great poem. Your word choice and flow was great. It made me think deeply while reading. The rhyming was slightly off, maybe you could improve on that. But I thought it was excellent. Keep it up! [: 5/5

It such a great poem,..very inspiring,5/5

Again, I just didn't really like it too much. In the line, "for in my life I have seen life as a never-ending ring." you repeat the word "life". I wouldn't do that, it makes the poem sound boring and repetitive. You've got a few gramatical errors, but nothing too major. I think once you polish it up it'll be a very nice poem. I liked the idea of imagery in the last line (which is what people remember most) and I think that saved the poem. 4/5.

Your determination here is so strong. i admire you will to finish and i can feel the strength this poem gives off.
well done
love its flow and word choise.
5

Inspiring is the firest word that springs to mind. some small parts could be changed, but someone has probally mentioned it anyway. good poem.