i love your peom, it really speaks the truth about this war. im gettting pretty sick of all the people who dont understand whats going on over there and dont care. i think your poem gives them a big reality check.

I think we are over there for a purpose and the soldiers think that too, my brother is a soldier serving overseas. the only reason innocent poeple die is because they get in the way. Think about the people in the twin towers and the planes. They were innocent but were killed for no reason too. Sometimes we have to fight to make people see that we are not to be messed with. So get over it. We're over there now and there is nothing you can do about it but welcome us. Or you too will get hurt.

Wow Robert, Overall i would rate this close to excellent. All points were clear and succinct, however, you had spelling errors througout the piece. Fix that, and i promise, your one of the best feeling expressers i know
~Hina

wow, your ability to write about so many different things. good job. 5/5

-no more

very good..i have only read 2 of ur poems so far right now,but ill read the rest later,and as much as i have read already,i can tell ur a good wrighter!!!!5/5 def.

very patriotic

its good. it was a little disconnected at first, but it only got better. again, i think you had a few spelling mistakes. good job though.
~Freak~

WOW!WOW!WOW! This is such a true poem about life ad war! Keep up the great work!
Love alwayz.....
Haily
XOXOXOXOXO

Great poem! 5.0 ♥

i really like the last 2 lines. they kinda pulled the whole poem 2gether. 5/5