by Robert Nov 27, 2004
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
We came from different ways of life and different ways we all did think, |
I love the way you ended this piece for it so true but you made it sound so simple, i like reading poems like this b/c its gets people to actually think and i think you have a great style of writing keep it up - |
by Michelle18
This is a good one... i love the topic ... glad someone took the time to write about something like this... descriptions were good and the flow was too.. |
Really interesting poem unusual layout but it worked well to suit the topic xxx alex xxx |
by JustKristina
Great job! i loved the topic and the message. it was very deep and showed your feelings on this subject! keep up the great work :o] |
I love this poem, it is very deep and excellently written, and it has very good rhymes and descriptions. |