Wow Erin, I only hope to write a poem as deep as this one day..I was simply entranced reading this...I am so glad to have on my faves list..please keep writing. Love , Tim

that poem is awesome, great job i loved it.

Wow, Erin! This is amazing! It could be about almost anything... I'm not sure exactly what you were writing about, but what jumped out at me is that it is the perspective of someone with Alzheimer's... but you could take almost any malady of life and appropriately apply this to it!

Excellent work!!

I happened upon this poem..and so glad I did. It is one of the best ones I have read since joining this site recently. I love all the things it says between the lines..I look forward to checking out more of your work.

Wow, this is a great poem! Soooo great!! I'm putting you in my favorites...
Love,
Tiff

very good poem, well done 5

Yes keep holding on very well done I liked it a lot!