The Inner Rose

by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤   Nov 27, 2004


Everyone is different in their own way
So find yourself and breakaway.
Stick out like a sore thumb
And see really what you become.

Life's not about the fights you have
With your family and your friends,
Its more about the memories you share
Throughout your life with them.

Its not about your dress size,
Or the way you do your hair,
Its not whats on MTV, or in magizines,
This whole society is unfair.

Its not about the "in" crowd
Or wearing those "cool" clothes
Its about the inside meaning
The inner rose.

kinda short, o well

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I think this poem could be amazing if you gave it some revision. You altar your rhyming all the way through, but If you managed to keep it consistant and perhaps a little longer, I think It'd be flawless.
    Just a thought though.
    Take care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bogie

    it may be short, but it got
    my attention. very good ;)

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