dude, u have a true talent.. no lie. this had such a wonderful beat. if u were a rapper u would be better than emeniem (sry about spelling). lol. well keep it up. i luv all ur poems.

hey adam well i've been waiting for another one of your great poems and this one is good keep it up;)
~love stacy~

there will be alot of updates soon :D .. right now ive got about 60 half finished ones...hehe

thanks again..more to come soon..