OMG..Thats so beautiful!! Its not cheesy at all. That was great. I have to hold back the tears because its soo good. My heart is beating fast. Who was that about? Well Lipton I just wanted to tell you that it was great and I gave it a 5! If I every get a book publish I'll make sure the publisher will publish all of my friends :-D

Not Cheesy--very good. Wonderful job! Like you said to me, no one likes there own work, but believe me you did well. I'll ttyl!

See ya

This isn't cheesy at all! I loved it! The whole part about being online I can really relate to. But yeah, this poem was beyond excellence! =) Great job! And thank you for the comments, they mean a lot to me. Take care and happy holidays!

wow, that was really good, it wasn't cheesy at all. i really got caught up in it and i could feel what you felt. neway. awesome job!!! lylab. ciao~Lee

I really liked it:D...Great Job on it! *5/5*...Keep on writing! Check some of mine if you can:D... Best of Luck..
*God Bless*
*~*Sedusha...*~*

Not cheesy. Beautiful. I loved it. Give her this poem. Its wonderful.

(don't take this wrong. I say this about many poems.) It's so sweet!

So sad :'[ 5/5 -Liz