Missing You

by Charlotte   Nov 28, 2004


It’s been so long since we last spoke to each other
I miss you more and more every day that goes by
That my heart is now full of sadness and sorrow

I long to hear those sweet words that you speak
When you tell me how much you love me and care for me
Which always makes me feel so special like I’m your world

Your words always manage to make me laugh till I cry
No matter how bad my day has been you can still cheer me up
Never once does a frown cross my face when I’m in your company

It’s been to long since I heard those words that make me laugh and smile
But don’t get me wrong I still love you with everything I have
My heart just has to share its space with my sadness and my love

I count down the weeks till I can tell you I love you in person
And I can’t wait for the day you hold me in your arms
Where we can finally be together because I’ll always be yours

So until the time we speak again which I hope for my hearts sake is soon
I’ll remember the memories I have of us laughing and talking together
And think of all the love I so dearly feel for you my sweetheart

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  • 19 years ago

    by Charlotte

    Thanks for your comment I always appreciate hearing how I can improve my work

  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    I thought it was alright.

    Not bad, definately not deserving a 1. Then again, ratings don't matter... I've learned that the hard way. :)

    Well as for the poem, I think I'd work on a more effective way in stringing together your emotions. Right now it seems that you're bluntly stating them and spoon-feeding them to the reader. Trying using more poetic terms...

    hope you don't mind my criticism...
    wish you all the best :)

  • 19 years ago

    by !*!Zoe!*!

    This is a beautiful piece of work. I think that you really have talent! Keep up the good work!
    xoxZoexox

  • 19 years ago

    by Charlotte

    Thanks they are helpful I really appreciate getting comments and i'll make aure to do the same for you