These are for the ones who do and don't remember
I'll tell you that I'll never forget that dreadful September
when you had told me exactly what, you had done
i had to go for a walk just do anything, go for a run.

*I like how you start this. I feel like I'm watching a movie. It makes me want to keep reading to find out what's next. Good*

i couldn't understand why this always had to happen
i didn't know if it was something that i was lacking
i am a nice guy if your nice to me..why is it always me
why couldn't it be someone else for change...instead of me

*I love the use of rhetorical questions, they are always a nice add to a poem. I also like that it's personal too. I can relate to what you're saying about it always being you*

i wish that i could explain to you in this poem what is wrong
but i can't because i don't so i just live life...just living on
i don't know much about anything or how to live your life
but i know trying to end it was worse then what she did that night

*This part was really sad. I like how the pain your feeling keeps you from explaining what happened.*

i know that all my feelings lately have been really sad
i was going through life never knowing I'd been had
i wish my life where better but it won't ever be for me
i am destined to live out my life..night after night lonely

*Aww what a sad ending. I really liked this one. I thought this was your best work because it displays true heartfelt emotions and you can't fake that. Very nice work. Shanik*