Ok please write comments, they help beginers like me. and please vote. thank you

Amazing poem as always hun, but i unno if this is on purpose, but you put the poem in there twice...it was really godo, the rhymes were really well written, i loved your use of words, and all in all it was spectacular. xxxxxx luv ya

-Mortalidaga
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Excellent :)

Very good with the rhyming, you're very talented. Keep up the good work and you will go far.

Logan, this is a beautiful poem. I love the repetition in it aswell. You really are a great writer,
Keep up the good work,
xoxZoexox

thank you all for all your support, it really helps. =)

wow, great poem!! the repetition makes it sooo much more effective & meaningful, great work!

thanks for your comments again

nice poem you are a natural at this...

great poem keep it up

wow that was awesome maybe you can help me out by a few comments on my poems

amazing poem...just awesome !!!!!! love,
E.

Cool and amazing. Love the way you wrote it all.

nice poem!

creative and beautiful

Hey logan i thought that poem was great! ive red most of your poems and there all great!!! it'd really help me too if you commented on my poems aswell if you dont mind! i would really appreciate it if you did! If you can please comment on
"to live a life of rhymes"! i dont care if you dont comment on the rest! but id really like that one to be commented on! please! and you can comment the other ones too if you want!! lol!
Love Paige
keep ^ the good work!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo