by pinkalias Nov 28, 2004
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
My lover had been taken captive the word, the word reached my castle walls |
I am a big fan of the lord of the rings trilogy and this is a really well written poem that actually reminded me of the return of the king when Eowyn took off her helmet afterwards. Keep up the good work |
Very neat poem! hehe its awesome..Keep on writting! I deffinatley gave u 5outta5:o) |
by Sean Allen
Heh, I liked it. I was curious about the line that ends with "win." It seemed like the poem stuck with a specific rhyme scheme until that was thrown in. Of course, if it were intentional, ie there to add emphasis to the importance of the victory, then that's fine :-) |
To know that someone as talented as you has discovered me I'm thankful, and also to have now discovered you and I read this poem...I am forced to laugh. This particular piece drew me right in as thoroughly as I would imagine who knew it would everyone. Superb/ |
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