Hey Jill I really like this poem. I got your comment in my poems lol my "ghetto" poems lol. I just write about things in my life. A couple are will,friends,parents,and somtimes im just writing. you should write about tom or your sis or just your life. You'll think of sumthin. i luv writin poems cuz its my way of letting things out that i really couldnt say. lol good luck and i think your poems are good.