Forever Broken

by ShadowedPhoenix   Nov 28, 2004


I remember what had happened,
But it took a very long time.
Time of grieving,
And very dark goodbyes.
I will tell you a story
A story often told
of how Death erased love
without a care.
A life one most daring and yet 2 scared.

It was the same as every other day,
The way you'd look at me and
"I love you and I always will"
But as a saw your body there lifeless and still.
I couldn't free my anger or my fears,
The love of my life was no longer near.
I can't explain but 2 this day it hasn't changed.
The few moments before the accident in my mind is erased
And a photo of you instead is placed,
I do remember the crying
And the pain and now the years
of turmoil at the mere mention of your name.
As i say this loud with expressions near insane,
And i watch as these people cry 4 you today
But they do not know my pain.
I miss you now, this very day
be with me when I'm alone
Because i loved you then,
I ALWAYS will

I'm FOREVER BROKEN!

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  • 19 years ago

    by BabyGurl

    You have been thru alot of shiz and i am so sorri i hope that you are doing better great job just like the rest and danny i don't think shes ever written a bad one

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    I can feel your pain and anger throughout the poem.. and I definetely think writing the last line in capital letters added something. Sad, angry, great. Loved your poem.
    And thank you so much for reviewing two of mine, it honestly makes me truly happy when I get comments :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Hayley

    yea i agree with Danny. your poems are great. could you comment on mine? broken and any other one i would appreciate but especially broken. thanks keep up the great work

  • 19 years ago

    by Danny

    Have you EVER wrote a bad poem. Ever