Comments : I can

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Its flow captured me from the start. Begging from the world a second chance. After your lost repentence leaves you defenseless. Superb.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    I'm glad you're recovering... Damn, that poem definetely shows some strong, dark emotions. Keep writing down everything you feel, it's talented. I love your use of words, they're extremely bold.