It's short but not bad it ... idk it just doesn't seem like ... idk ... just didn't seem like you put a whole lot of thought into it ... kind of like you just wrote your feelings out and just spoke what came to mind . . . keep it up

I like this poem its good. So good job with your new award and you know what I just noticed you are calling me "Shelb". Why is that? I like it though so go ahead even though you would have anyways but yeah.