Scared of commitment

by Traci   Nov 29, 2004


This isn't my best poem. i was just writing what i was thinking. I really need to work on this one some more but please let me know what you think of it so far.

You say you'll love
me for the rest of time
but because your mom and dad
divorced when you were nine
you can't marry me
and your words should be
commitment enough

We have lived together
four amazing years
i promise to love you
and work through the tears
nothing comes easy but
with love we can make it

So baby please change
your mind cuz
i want to make this
all right by
making my name
Traci Hite

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  • 19 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Thanks for commenting on my poem! I read a few of yours and liked them all. Keep it up!
    -Kate

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    i like it so far i think fear of commitment is a common problem these days. i agree commitment is a beautiful thing even sacred in the bonds of matrimony