A sequence of events

by candy   Nov 29, 2004


I devoted my every thought to you
i gave you my whole heart
you were all i ever thought of
together or apart

i loved you so very much
and you said that you loved me
then why did you touch other girls
when you thought i couldn't see

you cheated on me again and again
and promised to stop when i found out
but you kept on touching them
saying i had no reason to shout

i called on the telephone
saying "we need to talk tonight"
but a whole lot of good that did
just led to a week long fight

every night we fought for hours
it hurt me more than you
even though i still felt that love
i did what i had to do

i started off with "i still love you"
but you don't feel the same
cus if you really loved me
you wouldn't have treated this like a game

you touched the other people
even after promising to stop
treated me like nothing
like something you could just drop

when i told you it was over
you gave me a surprise
i could see you sobbing
and i could hear your cries

you told me you still loved me
that you regretted what you had done
i said to accept the consequences
and finish what you'd begun

every day you begged me
for another chance to try again
said you were so sorry
for putting me where I'd been

you said if you didn't have me
you'd have nothing to live for
so now I'm the reason
you're not living anymore

i guess you really loved me
cus then you picked up a knife
said you'd always love me
and then you took your life

first you were breathing deeply
then that turned into gasps
i heard you take your dying breath
and somebody in the back round laugh

theres the devil standing over you
filled with the utmost pride
he found another victim
and led them to suicide

now that i no longer see you
i think only of our love
then i raise my gun and join you
and we fly together above

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michael Reyes

    damn great poem...all your poems are

  • 19 years ago

    by Annah Lynn

    hey gurlie its me lol this is one of your best girl!! luv ya!

  • 19 years ago

    by candy

    thanks so much.

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Gr8 poem!!!
    It was really sad and i hope it isn't true.
    I related 2 it until the death part but it added character 2 your poem a defiant *5* BEAUTIFUL!!
    xoxoxoxoxoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by kathy

    This poem made me sad...and it made me think...It made me think about the numerous times I've thought about suicide because of a boy..this is wonderfully written...