wouldn't it be nice if life was really like that? Nicely written

Wow...beautiful poem...i loved the last stanza...the way u said you don't doubt the great power of love...that was so beautiful....loved it...take care and keep writing....FIVE>>>

Simply one of the most beautiful poems i've ever had the pleasure of reading. :] I liked your rhhme scheme and each stanza was even greater than the one before it. I think the emotion, here, was very well portrayed and the flow was flawless, as well. And this was very well written. :] great write. def. 5/5.