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thank you very much ryan

I very down to earth and honest feel to this poem. I felt the love of the moment in the sebject matter. I like the reference to short breath and steamy air, which was good for atmosphere. The title "Untitled" add to the atmosphere are well. The atmosphere seems to very lost in the moment or dream like. "words float" and "heart soaring" helps the dream like atmosphere very much. I can tell be this poem that you have done work on refining your style and abiltiy as a poet. Good poem.