Again, i loved this poem!! It was great. I got you added to my favorites..so I check your new stuff all the time. I give you a 5/5.

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

I keep reading this poem over and over again..its really really good. I love it!!!

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

wow....this is incredibly written. I admit, the beginning started out lovely, but twords the middle it got absolutly breath taking. I love your imagery, its truly a work of art. The way that you described each picture was dramatic and intense. I especially admired the stance,

"Delicious imagery. A breathless flutter inside
Coats my tongue with the sticky paint of
Aching discontent and salty thirst,"
wow, your imagery and choice of symbolism is breath taking. fantastic job

An ode to desire!
You've captivated with your elegant tongue.
Excellent.

OMG This on is soo descriptive..I luv it!
Favorite lines:
Delicious imagery. A breathless flutter inside
Coats my tongue with the sticky paint of. Aching discontent and salty thirst,

I like the personification..very very excellent!

holy crap! you have reached new heights of amaziness! x

very poetic great poem your really talented 5/5
bec xXx