My Real Star.!.!.

by Saravana Kumar S   Nov 29, 2004


I don't admire the stars shining in the skies,
why should i,when they are right in your eyes,
you give the power for those stars to shine,and
that's why your beauty to my eyes is so divine.

All those stars are really many light years away,
and that's why their looks are only for display,
but i'm very fortunate to touch and feel my star,
a touch,a feeling that can heal millions of scar.

Those stars seem to appear only during the night,
only in darkness they are able to show their might,
Whenever u look into sky,those stars seem to hide,
because they know the real star has come to guide.

Even though there are millions of stars in the sky,
no one wants to compete with you,i don't know why,
they seem to be content with the glory they have got,
may be that's why no one is willing to give it a shot.

In time,many of these bright stars seem to fade away,
some of them make way for a new star to come and stay,
but you are one star that i will never ever let go,
I love you more than my life,i guess even you know.

You are the only star that can be seen in day and night,
i feel everything is alright,only after seeing your sight,
no wonder why everyone question what sought of girl u are,
Well i have got an answer for them,you are "My Real Star."

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  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    aww... it's so sweet! it's really a beautiful piece any girl would beg for. i loved it lots! thanks for the comments- appreciate it. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    a beautiful awesome love poem5 >>>>>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Great job Kumar. Great job on the poem. Keep it up. Thanks for the comments on mine. I'll have to keep up with yours. :)

    Ashley

  • 19 years ago

    by Aishite Imasu

    Once again I bow to your greatness I enjoyed this poem a lot. U got massive talent her man you quit this site im not coming back again.

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    i love the way u compare ure love to the stars and so convincingly prove shes the real star!! great one :-)