right on.

this was good and I liked it but political poems and that of conflict don't do well on these forums but it was well presented Godd job. I got alot of poems take a look.

this was good and I liked it but political poems and that of conflict don't do well on these forums but it was well presented Godd job. I got alot of poems take a look.

That was well written there were however a few moments when I thought that the poem seemed to lose it flow.
Just some suggestions as to minor changes. Please feel free to ignore them if you want to.

What would have happened if Martin Luther King never spoke out?
What would happen to this country if he was silenced through doubt.

There is only right solution to the problem here
So let America, stand united to make it clear.

But as I said already a well written poem. I hope my comments help.

Nici.

ur poems r great, i really loved them, ur an awsome writer hope to read more of ur work soon