by Tina Nov 29, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
love is
I wish the world would see him as I see him. I wish the world could feel as I do when he's around. When his arms wrap around my stomach and I lay my head on his chest and listen to his heartbeat. I feel so safe, so secure. He holds me like I'm his angel, so softly yet tight enough like he's afraid of letting go. I fit perfectly into every curve of his body, like God made us to be together, like his heart beats just for me. He treasures me like I'm someone special, he makes me feel loved. His tender hands brush the hair out of my eyes and he whispers you're beautiful in my ear. No ones ever told me that with such meaning and i feel tears in my eyes. His soft kiss on my neck sends a chill down my spine and sends goosebumps to my arms, and for once, I know I am loved. You may think I'm too young to know what love is, but I'd like to hear your definition of a strong and overwhelming emotion. I know that he's all I think about, and when i see another guy nothing compares to him. Just the sound of his voice gives me joy which I haven't felt in years, and when I'm with him I never want him to leave. He makes me a better person and I'm better when he's around. I don't feel complete without him. He has my heart and I'll be lucky if I ever get it back. I may not know what your definition and standards of love are but I don't care, nothing will change my mind of my heart on how I feel. Love is something you have no control over, it just happens. It's not a state of mind but a state of heart.You don't get to choose who you love, I'm just glad I love someone who loves me back. Nothing you can do will destroy that love that grows in my heart everyday,so for just one moment see the one you love through my eyes, see him like the world has never seen him before, and above all else..love him with all your heart. |
by Aymon F
That describes it pretty well. I read it all, its very strong, and it made me remember every part of my own experiences. Nice job |
excellent poem, and no ur not to young to be in love. dont let anyone tell you you are |