by polly Nov 29, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
God, give me wings, |
by yaRis
Hey Polly Just so u know ofcourse i didn't take ur poem and changed it up abit i wouldn't do dat and i would love it if no one did dat to me... n dis is the first time i read your poem...but just so u won't think i did imma go now and write it in spanish so u won't think i stold it. I DON"Y COPY WRITE! |
aww that was good! I loved it great job |
by polly
tis ok, thanks, but maybe then u dont get the poem, as it is not about the flow in this particular piece of writting, but i apriciate your opinion none the less |
by UM
Good poem, but it doesn't seem to flow right to me. Just my opinion. |
by ** JeNa **
another great poem, hope to read more of ur work soon, good job!!! |