Another great one, really really well written. Probably one of my favorites by you. The whole poem was awesome, I could never pick a favorite part. O_O *stares in amazement* well anyway, keep it up!
5/5
-Cheerfully Cynical-

another great poem, hope to read more of ur work soon, good job!!!

Good poem, but it doesn't seem to flow right to me. Just my opinion.

tis ok, thanks, but maybe then u dont get the poem, as it is not about the flow in this particular piece of writting, but i apriciate your opinion none the less
polly

aww that was good! I loved it great job

Hey Polly Just so u know ofcourse i didn't take ur poem and changed it up abit i wouldn't do dat and i would love it if no one did dat to me... n dis is the first time i read your poem...but just so u won't think i did imma go now and write it in spanish so u won't think i stold it. I DON"Y COPY WRITE!