WOW that is powerful stuff, good work but i hope that no one would ever do that

that was good i actully tried that but something always happens

thank you so much for your compliments i appreciate them a bunch!

good theory, good poem, just work on it and it will be perfect. Memba me? Im da girl hoo rote dat suicide note poem u read? thanks for commenting, greatly appreciated.

Good poem! I like it, the rhytm is great ;)
Sad, though... But I like sad poems.
Please check out my poems and commennt them, I've only gotten _one_ comment altogether :-P

Hugs!

wow this is great very sad, but its also very powerful and kind of chilling in the end.. nice job. way to go
~hayley~

It is a very moving poem and I definetly give it a 5. I love it and when I read it I felt for the girl in it.
Jenn

Powerful Stuff!

Failed

Wow! Great poem! And you leave up at suspence at the end! Very talented! Keep writting!5/5

much love
savannah

wow, powerful! 5/5!

~katie~

thats so sad! i cut but i have no intention if killing myself...thats an awesome poem...by the way im getting help for my problem...anyways ill keep reading! awesome 5/5!
Jamie

hey this poem was awesome, but sad, my email is blair265@hotmail.com if you wanna chat xxx

i seriously cried..

<3 Moe