awesome poem really it was, I loved how you just really put the meaning into the whole thing. Great mixture of words...Yeah and thank you for commenting on mine also..---Ashlee---

Another dang great poem!

that was really beautiful. You're a really amazing poet! i hope you'll keep me posted when you write more

<3 jenn

thank you guys soo much! im working on one right now...i think its going to be my best yet!
-xoxo-

wow! I can really relate! your poems are so awsome! I love them! i feel that way when people come over to my house and they wonder how i can just sit here listening to my parents fight. . .well i'm just used to it at least they dont beat each other when people are over. . . keep writing these great poems!

Love, Taylor

Hey thanks for commenting on my poem that ment a lot to me. It seems like you father is similar to mine. I am sorry. It sucks and I hate it but sadly I do not think there is anything that we can do, nothing that I know of anyway. If you ever want to talk to you can e-mail me or leave me a comment. Great poem especially for your 2nd one. You got good flow. Peace and Love