Sin, Sorrow and Sadness

Your reason to live is to continue writing poems, we need someone like you, so don't die, be happy always, my prayers and wishes are all for you,
thank god i found you, Hip, hip, hooray to our great poet.^_^

WOw
~HazE

Its very good, it kind of falls off at the end a little bit but you may have done that on purpose. Short and to the point...
With love, K Kristina

I liked it, very nice. short, but very beautiful