nice job! u describe everything so well! keep it up chicky!! luv alwayz xoxox

Great poem! I loved it! I can relate to it.. If ya ever wanna talk my e-mail in Smileblp2@aol.com

Heyy... another wonderful poem :)

your a great writer, and i love reading your work... matter of fact im gunna add you to my favorites. I like the way you chopped it up... i like doing that with my poems... anyways great work

PS. If you dont feel like checking out my profile here i'll just give you my screan names...

If you have aim or aol my screan name is "seasonsnvrchnge"

and if you have msn... my email is "jenjen_143@hotmail.com"... you can email me at that too if you want.

anyways.... 5/5 on this poem-Jen-