by Aken Sol Nov 30, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
If I knew I’d die today |
by Sean Allen
Okay, now that I've had some time to reflect upon ur poem, I can definitely say with a pretty good amount of certainty that it is damn good. I didn't like the asterisk to your other poem thing... it seems a bit too much, referencing your own work. Maybe a bit of, uh, relying on the reader to make them connections eh? Show, don't tell, ya big goof. |