this is a horrible subject but I know its a part of some peoples lives. it was a great poem... it just made my heart reach for you.. I hope it was not true. because you are wrong... people would miss you!

its awesome. lifes a bi*ch... it totally sux. you gotta keep going though. keep writing! your very talented!

Thanks guys. I have a very destructive nature so writing about this stuff keeps me from doing it most of the time.

Very well done, lovely structure and flow. I only have one queation, if you would have no regrets (in the writing) then why did you grab a wash cloth? Was it to stop the bleeding or was the washcloth something more symbolic?

Hey Aaron. To answer your question (which was a good one, by the way), I reach for the washcloth because it soaks up the blood, symbolically and in reality. Its not necessarily about regret, but it is about soaking up pain, filling a void, just draining yourself of everything and letting yourself go. In many ways its like the washcloth is sucking regret and pain, depression and resentments.
Thanks for asking.
With love, K. Kristina

i feel like that sometimes, no i'm not ganan commit cuicide lol