That was great. I loved the repetition. You did do a very good job of expressing your emotions. Please keep writing, I would love to read more.
Take Care,
Hannah

This is another good one. It makes people who havent struggled with depression be able to understand more and "walk in" those peoples shoes. Great job.
With love, K. Kristina

i understand you on this poem a lot b/c i used to have these same questions and ya know why i think you should live?
you should live through the struggles to prove your strength, to find yourself and find your own happiness, to be the best person you can be.
you should check out my poem "struggles" not b/c i am beggin for attention but b/c maybe it could explain to you what i want to show you.
loves.