very unique! loved every minute! keep writing!
xoxo
Lauren

good job seth,I think everyone knows what you mean because we probably have all felt it or are feeling it right now.Keep up the great work, you always seem to surprise me with what you come up with.

loved it...awesome wording and it flowed very nicely. i also enjoyed how you described it..i could picture myself feeling what you felt..keep writing!
-xoxo-
Lauren

lol just realized i comment on here 2 times lol well take it as a double compliment!

great poem,i feel what you are feeling when i read this