Nowhere to Hide

by BriAnna   Nov 30, 2004


We met over the summer
and my attraction to you was so strong.
If only I would have known
that me and you would be so wrong.

We never were official,
but we might as well have been.
Because you'd call me every night
and said you'd pick me up at 10.

Then we'd go back to you're house
and do what we do best.
I don't really need to explain,
I'm sure you can guess the rest.

But the more I thought about it,
I realized it wasn't cool.
I was only a pawn in your game,
I was done being played a fool.

But still everytime I get drunk,
all of a sudden you are by my side.
I don't want you to be there,
but there's nowhere I can hide.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Fluffy Cotton

    The emotions you convey in this poem are much like your other ones, very well conveyed. That's one of the things i like about your type of poem writing. You're good at conveying emotions. Your structure is alittle shaky. The stanza's and rhyming consistancy is fine but you're just a little off on syllables. Not all poems need to have matching syllables but with the type of writing you're working on, i think it would help alot. excellent job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    liked it... i no what your saying i feel you

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