This is really good and I can relate. |
Awesome poem, as usual. I hate the concept of time, it his the human kinds greatest weakness for many reasons. I hope you prove yourself wrong though, and can look to brighter days. Take care. Thanks for another wonderful poem. |
i reeli like this poem, check out some of mine if u get the chance.... thanx! keep writing! |
by Ann Stareyes
Deep, Deep, But beautifully written. lol |
amazing poem... sad but i like it... like how it goes... yes time desnt heal all wounds, it always leave us scars to remember, and that scar will again freshen up... oh well life ... but i liked this one, gave it a 5 =) hope u pass by mine =) real 6 feet away, i need an honest comment and voting =( coz they kept on rating my poem low, help me know if mine really sux that much... thanx |
by Lipton
This is so true. No matter what, I will always remember what has happened to me in the past, and all that whatnot. Great job! jw, are your poems real? |
Very good. |
It was really good, all of yours are. Keep up the good work! |
by *Elizabeth*
WOW!! this poem was soo completely amazing, I must say it is one of my favorites!!!! I love it soo much!! I think I'll print it out so I can read it over and over!!! You have so much talent!! I love reading your work! your terrific!!!! just wonderful! |
by ReBecca
this is my favorite part: |
by Iyla
this is very VERY good, i can relate, great job |